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From: Keith Parks
Date: Jun 6, 2013 3:10PM
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On Jun 6, 2013, at 2:38 AM, Ravindra Kumar Jain wrote:
> Hello Everyone .
>
> It gives me great pleasure and excitement to tell everybody that , I
> have come up with a website dedicated to accessibility.
> link:
> www.projectrics.org
>
> [snip...]
>
> Please do let me know what you think.
Hello.
I see a possible problem within your copy:
The paragraph under the subhead "Cross platform compatible" seems to contain other sections that are meant to be subheads of their own with their own following text.
Specifically, "Usability: Usability and accessibility..." and (I believe) "Accessible content will be...". OR perhaps there is only some missing punctuation before that last one (?).
Otherwise, you seem to do a fairly good job of introducing the principles of web accessibility to an audience that is web-savy, but not knowledgable about accessibility.
Also, you asked for a focus on the content, not the presentation, but I do have to mention that, at least for someone viewing the site on a traditional desktop browser, the extremely long lines of text make the larger paragraphs somewhat difficult to read.
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